Scion of Fangor

Some of you read the first bit of Chapter One, so hears the second bit I promised. Dig in! Alex was the sort of person you couldn't forget, you'd look ...

Someone with a long nose and glasses who does archery and likes the dark :) .

Probably some Sci-Fi to do with an alien invasion, or a story with germ warfare and it's effects etc. Lots of lasers and awesome explosions and obviously some genetically enhance ...

Elvria: Feelings are irrelevant, if the enemy are still alive I shall kill them. If they are dead then I shall lie down and join them in the dusk, while ...

run

Q: What's your full name and what is it's meaning? Elvria - She who walks with Shadows Q: Where is your favorite place and what memories made it that certain ...

Thank you Blink the site proved very helpful. :D

Hello People, My first foray into the poetry forums :smt005 its a scary place :). I've been asked to do some poetry to help promote Transition Town Llandrindod (A Local ...

Anyone?

Hello, If anyone has any information about CERN I would be very interested. Specifically any information about what a particle collision looks like, how long it takes, how much energy ...

Ice

same shade for eyes. I can't help thinking that this should be "same shade of eyes". whose wife and he both decided I think this should be "they decided". Apart ...

Hi, I thought it had great build up, but a sudden ending that could be expanded more. You could give a technical description of a "bomb" for instance, tell us ...

I really like it. But that just might be me. The scenery needs expanding a lot as do the chapters. Still a good read, keep writing! It mostly seems right ...

Thank you for all the kind reviews :) I've made most of the suggested edits to the story, hopefully that's made it a bit better. As soon as I'm ready ...